“This was very helpful and I’m truly appreciative. Each of your bullet points with feedback gave me little nuggets to help build a better professional story.
As you noted, I wanted my leadership experience to stand out and your pointer about adding a summary and moving my accomplishments to the top was a great way to showcase my work. Your feedback to list my experience chronologically caused me decide to list my “stay at home mom” role on my resume as well. It helps tell the story. I loved the thoughtfulness that went into your critique of my resume. It was so very kind of you.”